It looks okay to me. Been knocked around a bit though.
I have moved it to the correct area so you will likely get more answers.
Searching for anything relating to, Anton Boos, 934 Stamm. Kp. Pz. Erz. Abt. 7, 3 Kompanie, Panzer-Regiment 2, 16th Panzer-Division (My father)
looks ok to me.
Don't see anything wrong with it.